diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/issue-2319 b/changelog/unreleased/issue-2319
index d36858bc8..90f42a302 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/issue-2319
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/issue-2319
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 Bugfix: Correctly dump directories into tar files
 
 The dump command previously wrote directories in a tar file in a way which
-can cause compatibility problems. This caused for example 7zip on Windows
-to open tar files containing directories. In addition it was not possible
+can cause compatibility problems. This caused, for example, 7zip on Windows
+to not open tar files containing directories. In addition it was not possible
 to dump directories with extended attributes. These compatibility problems
-were fixed by properly setting the attributes of a directory.
+are now corrected.
 
-In addition a tar file now includes the name of the owner and group of a file.
+In addition, a tar file now includes the name of the owner and group of a file.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/issues/2319
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/3039