From c90356bfe105af7d038d9c6b00dd98bbe51c154d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Coomber <47242934+dcoomber@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 13 Aug 2022 17:11:27 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Misc. grammar / formatting changes

---
 examples/question.sh |  8 ++++----
 mycommands.sh        | 14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/examples/question.sh b/examples/question.sh
index 6974888..0244e44 100755
--- a/examples/question.sh
+++ b/examples/question.sh
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ unset IFS
 
 # kill interactive script if not finished in time, e.g. user away or error
 MAXWAIT="1m"
-{ sleep "${MAXWAIT}"; printf "Stopping Questionnaire after %s, you need to much time to finish ... BYE\n" "${MAXWAIT}"; kill $$; wait 2>/dev/null ;} &
+{ sleep "${MAXWAIT}"; printf "Stopping questionnaire after %s.  You've taken too much time to finish!  BYE\n" "${MAXWAIT}"; kill $$; wait 2>/dev/null ;} &
 
 # simple yes/no question, defaults to no
 printf "Hi, hello there\nWould you like some tea (y/n)?\n"
@@ -39,15 +39,15 @@ read -r answer <"${INPUT}"
 if [[ ${answer,,} == "y"* ]]; then
 	printf "OK then, here you go: http://www.rivertea.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Green-Tea.jpg\n"
 else
-	printf "OK then, no tea ...\n"
+	printf "OK then, no tea...\n"
 fi
 
 # question with Keyboard, repeating until correct answer given
 until [ "${SUCCESS}" = "y" ] ;do
-	printf 'Do you like Music? mykeyboardstartshere "Yass!" , "No"\n'
+	printf 'Do you like music? mykeyboardstartshere "Yass!" , "No"\n'
 	read -r answer <"${INPUT}"
 	case ${answer,,} in
-		'') printf "empty answer! Try again\n";; 
+		'') printf "Empty answer! Try again\n";; 
 		'yass'*) printf "Goody! mykeyboardendshere\n";SUCCESS=y;;
 		'no'*) printf "Well that's weird. mykeyboardendshere\n";SUCCESS=y;;
 		*) SUCCESS=n;;
diff --git a/mycommands.sh b/mycommands.sh
index 6a894e5..1a80153 100644
--- a/mycommands.sh
+++ b/mycommands.sh
@@ -123,22 +123,22 @@ else
 
 	case "${MESSAGE}" in
 		##################
-		# example commands, replace them by your own
+		# example commands, replace them with your own
 		'/_dice_re'*) # dice from user received
 			sleep 5
-			local gameresult="*Congratulation ${USER[FIRST_NAME]} ${USER[LAST_NAME]}* you got *${MESSAGE[RESULT]} Points*."
+			local gameresult="*Congratulations, ${USER[FIRST_NAME]} ${USER[LAST_NAME]}*, you got *${MESSAGE[RESULT]} points*."
 			[ -z "${FORWARD[UID]}" ] && send_markdownv2_message "${CHAT[ID]}" "${gameresult}"
 			;;
 		'/game'*) # send random dice, edit list to fit your needs
 			send_dice "${CHAT[ID]}" ":$(printf "slot_machine\ngame_die\ndart\nbasketball\nsoccer\nslot_machine"|sort -R|shuf -n 1shuf -n 1):"
 			if [ "${BOTSENT[OK]}" = "true" ]; then
-				local gameresult="*Congratulation ${USER[FIRST_NAME]}* ${USER[LAST_NAME]} you got *${BOTSENT[RESULT]} Points*."
+				local gameresult="*Congratulations, ${USER[FIRST_NAME]} ${USER[LAST_NAME]}*, you got *${BOTSENT[RESULT]} points*."
 				sleep 5
 				case "${BOTSENT[RESULT]}" in
-				  1)	gameresult="*Sorry* only *one Point* ...";;
-				  2)	gameresult="*Hey*, 2 Points are *more then one!*";;
-				  5|6)	[[ "${BOTSENT[EMOJI]}" =~ fb0$ ]] || gameresult="*Super! ${BOTSENT[RESULT]} Points!*";;
-				  6*)	gameresult="*JACKPOT! ${BOTSENT[RESULT]} Points!*";;
+				  1)	gameresult="*Sorry* only *one point* ...";;
+				  2)	gameresult="*Hey*, 2 points are *better than one!*";;
+				  5|6)	[[ "${BOTSENT[EMOJI]}" =~ fb0$ ]] || gameresult="*Super! You got ${BOTSENT[RESULT]} points!*";;
+				  6*)	gameresult="*JACKPOT! ${BOTSENT[RESULT]} points!*";;
 				esac
 				send_markdownv2_message "${CHAT[ID]}" "${gameresult}"
 			fi